typography practice

front cover college magazine

The image is suitable for the magazine. However, the colour scheme is makes it look different and I should change it to only 3 colours so it looks better. Also I will need to change the positions of the sublines as they look very disorganised. The main cover line should be more bold so people can read it easier also as it's more important. But, the image in the background makes it look better as it's related to the genre of the magazine.
To improve I should change the placings of the sublines because they look cramped up and i should make the headline bigger to make it stand out more.

college magazine contents page

The image is suitable for the contents page as its a photo of another student and it relates to the magazine however I should decrease the opacity of make it easier to read and to make it stand out more also to make it look different to the front cover. I also need to change the placings of the information as they are not placed professional and it doesn't look good. Also the text is hard to read therefore I should change the font to make it easier to read.

example

front cover layout

content page payout

XXL

• Mid Long Shot (MLS)
• Body language: serious
• clothing- expensive 
• 3 colour rule 
• price and bar code
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• fact about hip hop artist clothing's
• this magazine is less formal than Clash
• its audience is people aged 13-19
• slang used to attract teenagers 
• images of artists
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content page

• one page (pages were ripped out)
• one column 
• the personas clothing is different
• page numbers to help find what people need
• a picture of the artist